写作思路：根据题目要求，可以以“随着网络的普及，网上购物日渐流行”作为背景，写一件自己网购的事，最后对网购进行评价，正文：With the popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become increasingly popular, and I have also learned online shopping.随着网络的普及，网上购物日渐流行，我也学起了网购。I thought the pencil box I bought online the day before yesterday had to wait until the day after tomorrow, but I didn't expect the pencil box to arrive today. Although it has only one floor, it has five organs, which is very interesting.我本以为前天在网上买的铅笔盒，需要等到大后天才到，没想到今天铅笔盒就到了，它虽然只有一层，但它有五个机关，特别有趣。Open the pencil case, push the switch, and a ruler appears. Press the eraser button, and a small box pops out with an eraser inside.打开笔盒，推一下开关，一把尺就这样出现了。按一下eraser按钮，一个小盒子就跳出来了，里面还有一块橡皮。Online shopping is really convenient and cheap. You can enjoy shopping without going out. It's better to move than to act. Try it!网上购物真是既方便又便宜，不必出门就可以享受购物的乐趣。心动不如行动，你也试试吧！
望采纳，谢谢。 With the development of Internet, more and more people tend to shop on the Internet.Online shopping has provided some benefits for us, but it also has some disadvantages at the same time.随着互联网的发展，越来越多的人喜欢在网上购物。网购给我们带来了一些好处，但是它同时也有一些缺点。For one thing, online shopping has brought some convenience for consumers.Instead of going one shop to another, people can choose and buy all kinds of commodities they like as long as they click the mouse gently.This is not only a better choice for the old who do not have enough energy to go outside but also a great convenience for those who have no time to go shopping in person.In addition, consumers have more choices and can do some comparison when they are shopping on the Internet.They can glance over various commodities in all shapes, sizes and colors and decided to buy or not.Furthermore, online shopping has made a great contribution to the development of express delivery industry.一方面，网上购物给消费者带来了一些方便。人们不再是逛一个个店，人们只需要轻轻点鼠标就可以选择购买他们想要的商品。这不仅对没有精力外出的老人来说是一个更好的选择，而且对那些没有时间独自出去购物的人来说也很方便。另外，消费者在网上购物的时候有更多的选择，也可以多做对比。他们可以浏览各种商品的所有型号，尺寸，颜色然后决定要不要买。另外，网上购物对快递行业的发展做出了很大的贡献。However, for another, shopping on the Internet also has some shortcomings.Firstly, those who shop on the Internet can’t try the goods before they buy.Sometimes, the real goods are not the same as the goods they see on the Internet.Secondly, some shops on the Internet are dishonest and they would not deliver the goods after paying.And if this situation happens, the consumers would find nowhere to complain and never pull out the money any longer.然而，另一方面，网上购物也有一些缺点。首先，那些在网上购物的人不能够在买之前试一下商品。有时候，食物和我们在网上看到的物品是不一样的。其次，网上有的店是不诚实的，付款后他们不会发货。如果发生了这种情况，消费者就会找不到地方抱怨，就拿不回钱了。Therefore, we should pay more attention when shopping on the Internet.因此，当我们网购的时候应该多注意。 ——来自{yh3057}英语牛人团

Media and Shopping With numerous technological advances, various kinds of media have been well developed.As a result, an increasing number of people are fond of purchasing goods with the help of media, such as newspapers, radio stations, TV stations and the Internet.As we know, there are always two sides to everything and shopping via media is no exception.On the one hand, it saves much time, money and effort to purchase goods through media since you don’t have to go to the shops in person.Besides, you can choose what you want from an enormous variety of goods on display.On the other hand, you may be cheated sometimes by the false information and suffer a considerable loss.As far as I am concerned, shopping via media brings great benefits to our life and our economy on the whole.At the same time, we need strengthened supervision over the information released via media.In this way, we can gain more benefits from shopping via media and reduce the possible harm to a minimum.媒体和购物 随着技术的进步，各种媒体都得到了很好的发展。因此，越来越多的人喜欢在媒体的帮助下购买商品，比如报纸、广播电台、电视台和互联网。 正如我们所知，任何事情都有两面性，通过媒体购物也不例外。一方面，它节省了很多时间、金钱和精力，通过媒体购买商品，因为你不必亲自去商店。此外，你可以从各种各样的商品中选择你想要的东西。另一方面，你可能会被虚假信息欺骗，并遭受巨大损失。 就我而言，通过媒体购物给我们的生活和经济带来了巨大的好处。与此同时，我们需要加强对通过媒体发布的信息的监督。通过这种方式，我们可以通过媒体获得更多的好处，减少可能造成的伤害。

There are lots of advantages of on-line shopping. Firstly,you can enjoy the convenience of on-line shopping:surf the internet and order your things easily.Secondly,you can search as much information as you can which normal couldn't do. What's more, lots of people love to pursue the fashion and then they choose on-line shopping:"."网购有许多便利之处。首先，你可以享受网购的便捷，浏览因特网订购你需要的东西。其次，可以搜索一些平常不常见的物品。此外，许多人喜欢潮流事物，他们会更愿意选择网购。 Advantages: easy to use, cheaper than the store, there are a lot of styles.save money and time 便于操作、比实体店便宜、款式多、节省时间和金钱
There are lots of advantages of on-line shopping. Firstly,you can enjoy the convenience of on-line shopping:surf the internet and order your things easily.Secondly,you can search as much information as you can which normal couldn't do. What's more, lots of people love to pursue the fashion and then they choose on-line shopping:"."网购有许多便利之处。首先，你可以享受网购的便捷，浏览因特网订购你需要的东西。其次，可以搜索一些平常不常见的物品。此外，许多人喜欢潮流事物，他们会更愿意选择网购。
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping on line.
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写作思路及要点：围绕网上购物，举出网上购物的利与弊，最后总结自己的想法。Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular ways of shopping. Going out shopping has become a kind of leisure walk.如今，网购已经成为人们的.热门购物方式之一，出门购物已经成为一种休闲时的散步。There are many advantages of online shopping. It can "go shopping" at home, ordering is not limited by time and place.网购的优点有很多。它可以在家“逛商店”，订货不受时间、地点的限制。It gets a lot of commodity information and can buy goods that are not available locally. It can save time and effort from ordering, buying goods to goods door-to-door without visiting the scene.它获得较大量的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。它从订货、买货到货物上门无需亲临现场，既省时又省力。To sum up, it can be seen that online shopping breaks through the barriers of traditional business, and has great attraction and influence on consumers, enterprises and the market. In the new economic era, it is undoubtedly an ideal mode to achieve "multi win" effect.综上可以看出，网上购物突破了传统商务的障碍，无论对消费者、企业还是市场都有着巨大的吸引力和影响力，在新经济时期无疑是达到“多赢”效果的理想模式。However, online shopping has many disadvantages. Online shopping can only be seen photos, to the goods really arrive in the hand, will feel different from the physical, which is not as good as in the mall to buy at ease. Network payment is not secure, may be peeping, password stolen.但是，网购还有许多缺点。网购只能是看到照片，到货物真的到达手里，会感觉和实物有不一样，这就不如在商场里买到的放心。网络支付不安全，可能被偷窥，密码被盗。And the delivery is too slow. Although the speed of EMS is faster than that of the past, buyers still have to wait for a few days. Online shopping also can't experience the leisure of shopping and chatting with relatives and friends.而且收货太慢，尽管现在EMS的速度已经比以前的邮寄快了不知多少倍，毕竟买家还是要等上几天。网购也不能和亲戚朋友一起体会逛街闲聊的悠闲。I don't think online shopping is better than shopping. We should reduce or strengthen the security of online shopping.我认为网购不比逛街好，应该减少网购或加强网购的安全性。
Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who shop online. Some people think that it is easy to shop online instead of going to shopping malls and stores. There are many different kinds of goods online, and people and search for what they want easily. So they don't have to spend time looking for what they want. However, online shopping may be harmful because those goods may not have good quality. When things are broken, it is also very difficult to find people who are responsible for repair. 如今，越来越多的人在网上购物。有些人认为网上购物比逛商场和商店容易。网上有很多不同种类的商品，人们可以很容易地找到他们想要的。所以他们不必花时间去寻找他们想要的东西。然而，网上购物可能是有害的，因为这些商品可能没有好的质量。当东西坏了，也很难找到负责修理的人。 如今，越来越多的人在网上购物。有些人认为网上购物比逛商场和商店容易。网上有很多不同种类的商品，人们可以很容易地找到他们想要的。所以他们不必花时间去寻找他们想要的东西。然而，网上购物可能是有害的，因为这些商品可能没有好的质量。当东西坏了，也很难找到负责修理的人。
More and more people begin to shop online. Of course there are many advantages . First it can save much time ,especially for those who are busy with their work . Second it is convenient and you don'
Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who shop online. Some people think that it is easy to shop online instead of going to shopping malls and stores. There are many different kinds of goods online, and people and search for what they want easily. So they don't have to spend time looking for what they want. However, online shopping may be harmful because those goods may not have good quality. When things are broken, it is also very difficult to find people who are responsible for repair.
there are advantages and disadvantages concering online shopping which has become a new fad amongconsumers of today.Online shopping is firstly favored by young people for its great convenience

写作思路：可以将网上购物的优点和缺点都详细地介绍一下，先说一下优点，比如网上购物非常的便利，不必浪费大量精力和宝贵时间等等；再说一下缺点，比如无法亲自试穿，纯在受骗的可能性。正文：With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.翻译：随着互联网的发展和计算机的普及，网上购物已经成为我们生活中的一个普遍现象。在这里，消费者几乎可以买到他们需要的所有东西。网上购物有很多优点，其中最重要的也许是它的便利性。人们不必浪费大量精力和宝贵时间从一家商店到另一家商店去选择他们喜欢的商品。这对于不能亲自去商店的老人、病人和忙碌的人来说尤其可取。这些商品在网上有各种形状、大小和颜色。他们所需要做的就是坐在电脑前，点击鼠标。他们订购的商品将迅速送到他们手中。然而，网上购物也有它的缺点。第一个缺点是消费者看不到商品或无法亲自试穿。有时，真正的商品可能与他们在电脑上看到的不一样。第二个缺点是互联网上的一些商店没有注册。他们从你那里拿到钱后，再也不会给你送东西了。一旦上当受骗，你会发现你无处抱怨。